Sunday, November 10, 2013

frost



we'll lay in the snow

and watch it fall to the ground.

we'll catch the flakes on our tongues

and let it tickle our noses.


we'll smile like nothing is wrong

and fall asleep in the silence.

we'll let the cold freeze our hearts

and let them melt away in the morning sun.


-Lloyd




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5 comments:

  1. John HayesNovember 12, 2013 at 10:37 AM

    I'm pissed that your pictures aren't loading, but the words were still awesome. Nice job pal.

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  2. Sara BrubakerNovember 12, 2013 at 10:48 AM

    I enjoy your writing. It's all the feelings everyone is afraid to express.

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  3. NelsonNovember 12, 2013 at 10:57 AM

    LOVED THIS.

    (I accidentally had the caps lock on...but now that I look at it, it feels right.)

    Great imagery (I never use that word).

    " we'll let the cold freeze our hearts

    and let them melt away in the morning sun."
    #stolen

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  4. Theodor GeiselNovember 12, 2013 at 11:01 AM

    WTF?? i dont know how. but you made laying in the snow sound beautiful..

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  5. UnknownNovember 19, 2013 at 9:26 AM

    "we'll smile like nothing is wrong

    and fall asleep in the silence."

    Shoot. Your words write movie scenes so well.

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