i wish i could pull my heart out of my chest and show you what you've done to it.
i wish i could tell you how i feel.
i wish you would forgive me.
i wish you would come back.
i wish you could know all the hours i spend thinking about you.
i wish i could see you one more time.
i wish you'd call me and say that you need me.
i wish i could hold you and keep you safe.
i wish i could take those last two words you said out of my mind.
i wish i would've tried harder to keep you from leaving.
i wish i could look into your eyes one more time.
i wish i could feel your lips against mine for just one more second.
i wish i could tell you i love you one more time.
i wish you could see this.
i wish i could put a gun to my head and make this all go away.
i wish i could get you off my mind.
but i can't.
-Lloyd.
dude I freakin love it. Your writing is so simple but hits really hard.
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this line. Keep it up.
This floored me. Damn.
ReplyDelete"i wish i could pull my heart out of my chest and show you what you've done to it."
"i wish i could get you off my mind.
but i can't."
Don't ever stop. I just want more and more...
I wish, I wish, I wish.
ReplyDeleteI might have to steal this idea for a writing prompt/ blog post/ etc.
Like M.S. said....so simple. But sometimes the plainest things are the most powerful.
"i wish i could take those last two words you said out of my mind."
I swear I commented on this already but I guess not. But yeah this was amazing. Great job pal
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